The feeling's closer now than then
on whispered touch around and in,
Once pale desire now crimson flush
does twist within and off then rush...
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I am sorry for your loss Kim. Great little poem, I enjoyed it, but I don't believe love ever dies. Smiling at you with a 10 from Tai
Thank you so much Tai for reading my poem, and for your concern. This is fictional, though I think we all at times have felt love's sting. Take care :) Kim