Love Goddess(Part 3) Comments

Very sensual. A confident writing from a bold pen. Wow. I think I might need a cigarette.

I wear the sound of the wind very nice line i love this poem.. Has such great creature and love... Krista

The living love you carry in your hand In your cheek is the red of my blood In your eyes of hazel I dream my love In your hairs I like in thick clouds hide The aroma of the first rain on the earth In your hairs lost but by the shine astir Like full moon glows your face agile Your lips are goblets for me to know Poison or wine and the thousand times Slipped on softness of the silk of skin Like Greek columns where legs meet To heaven any door when in orgasm Of cosmos tonight for goddess of love Curves of the back that curves and bends Hours of the artist to draw line and cuts Amber inside shall in beauty never come Add soul in remonstrance shall she say Nay with your word she looks her paint To the goddess have you with glory some What word what line bow to the nymphet

Beautiful and aromatic......10/10.

I loved the lines, I wear the sounds of the wind, and the scents of the roses. CP

wowwwww Resh a beautiful poem congratulations -- I loved it A++++ love anjali

He is the luckiest guy on Earth who has a most beautiful girl friend who is terribly sensuous. You are not only beautiful; you are a beautiful poet too. I envy that guy Loveliest poem.10 are too small a gift.

Even more addicting than this poem...you be? ....Lucky Guy who has the honour of calling you, his....Beautiful, sensual & off-the-charts imageful....One of your best young lady! F j R 2009

Reshma you do it so well! ! ! ! ! ! ! I just know that shaking or just holding your hand would be a sensuous experience to be remembered long. You are an extremely talented and warm (but not fuzzy) poet and I am proud to know you. Hxx

Beautiful piece my dear friend. makes me wanna see the person who write the words.10

The opening verse to this piece is astounding in its sensuous draw - - the whole piece is very readable and has evocative undertones all through...... a top mark for this one Reshma....... from Fay..

enchanting piece..wonderful words envelops your piece... you're indeed the goddess of love... beautiful imagery 10++

Delightful poems, Reshma..10............. Best wishes, Tsira

awesome write, cant wait to read the other 2