Wednesday, January 6, 2021

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brothers and sisters
love for one needy person
Brings out more talent
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Margaret Moran
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Luis Estable 06 January 2021

This needs a bit of more development to work as poetry. The last line, I think is out of place. It does not belong in the poem. It points to something else which is not the concern of the poem

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