Thursday, March 12, 2015

Love Garden Comments

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I grew up in a fertile field
All called me lily of the wild.
My growing days were golden rich,
I grew up bright, without a hitch.
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Josey Alfred
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Edward Kofi Louis 11 July 2016

I lost my sense, his magic touch! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Fantastic, love garden, inspirer me a lot.

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Valsa George 18 March 2015

Beautiful poem! The sorrow and loneliness of a lily is beautifully pictured! But the poem has a positive ending! Despite all neglect, she hopes that her seeds would grow! Also she declares firmly that only through love, life can be fostered! You are no toddler.... you are a poet ripe and fully grown!

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Josey Alfred 21 March 2015

Thak you very much for your valuable comments and opinion. Though I have been writing poems for a long time, but I Could not get any guidance, or opportunities to make my poems public. So I had to work my self, the hard way, to understand about poems and the the minimum basics requirements, by reading, from books. To get the confidence to go forward was difficult, somhow I tried only in Feb, this year to publish them in PH. I mean to say at my 70+ year. Thank you once again. JA

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