Friday, October 23, 2015

Love Futile Comments

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Love, be not kind
A ship lost in a distant sea
No solace do I find
Looking for someone for me
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Billy Loving
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Elisabeth Wingle 24 October 2015

I agree with you, love is often unkind. However, nothing is truly futile as long as we have hope. And one can wear a wedding ring and still be lonely I really liked this poem. If you have some time, read some of my poems, I would like your to hear your comments

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Shakil Ahmed 23 October 2015

your intense passion is well-expressed in the beautiful lines of the poem, i pray that you get a beautiful bride, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comment.

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