Monday, February 18, 2019

Love From Afar Comments

Rating: 5.0

My sweet Scrappy and I seem to be drifting apart,
It's all my fault for revealing my heart,
I thought being honest with my feelings was a must,
But in truth I think it caused me to lose her trust,
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Sun Flower
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C F 26 March 2019

Very well written, liked the flow of your images and words.10+ Next time, please heed this advice: i should have watched only from a distance to eat my soul all on my own but my music needed to be sung and after it was played it could not be undone

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 March 2019

Write comment. Beautiful poetry, Sun Flower. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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