Now a sudden darkness falls upon me,
Though sudden, I'm not taken by surprise;
Remembering all the alibis you told me,
Remembering how I fell for all your lies;
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Powerfully expressed emotions. Heartfelt words, emanating from the bottom of the heart, and heavy.
An excellent poem Lora, love can only stand but so much. Even so when lies, distrust gets a foothold in relationships that trust is no longer there and then it begins to falter and crumble. Of course there is always hope is love is strong enough.
Very well written poem Lora, and the feelings expressed here are very strongly evident. Forgiveness does not always come easily when one has been deeply hurt, and this is entirely understandable.
A beautiful pome but so sad when love dies through deceitful lies. Once trust has gone out of the window love soon follows.
Ah, love lost, how well expressed. Read mine - Last Rung On Your Ladder - Adeline