Thursday, June 13, 2013

Love Forever Lost Comments

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Now a sudden darkness falls upon me,
Though sudden, I'm not taken by surprise;
Remembering all the alibis you told me,
Remembering how I fell for all your lies;
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Lora Colon
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Adeline Foster 11 August 2013

Ah, love lost, how well expressed. Read mine - Last Rung On Your Ladder - Adeline

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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2013

Powerfully expressed emotions. Heartfelt words, emanating from the bottom of the heart, and heavy.

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Patricia Grantham 27 June 2013

An excellent poem Lora, love can only stand but so much. Even so when lies, distrust gets a foothold in relationships that trust is no longer there and then it begins to falter and crumble. Of course there is always hope is love is strong enough.

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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

a sad love poem written with good imagery. enjoyed the read

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Valerie Dohren 22 June 2013

Very well written poem Lora, and the feelings expressed here are very strongly evident. Forgiveness does not always come easily when one has been deeply hurt, and this is entirely understandable.

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David Wood 22 June 2013

A beautiful pome but so sad when love dies through deceitful lies. Once trust has gone out of the window love soon follows.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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