Saturday, October 20, 2018

Love For The Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart is filled with sorrow
knowing it will soon be hollow
when today turns to tomorrow
moments are just today
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Aqua Flower
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Susan Williams 28 October 2018

Heart break- -heart ache- - they will take over our future as well as our past if we let them. very good and sad and rather desperate poem! ! ! 10

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Aqua Flower 29 October 2018

Thank you for reading my poem, Susan. Love and heartache seems to be always dancing together. Yes does sound kind of desperate.

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Kostas Lagos 22 October 2018

Time marches on waiting for no one.10!

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Aqua Flower 22 October 2018

Hello you are the only reply on this poem. Thank you so much for reading it and for your astute evaluation

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