Thursday, April 12, 2018

Love For Her (Tanka)- 03 Comments

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Shattered in the cold, mild -
autumn breeze, she turns hungry and wild
To hold my hands close,
To hug me like a red rose-
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Mihaela Pirjol 17 April 2018

This is such an intense and passionate poem! There is such a fire of emotions in these verses, that makes the heart of the reader to beat faster! I love it!

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Thanks Mihaela, Thanks for the lovely remarks and these great words of encouragement.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 April 2018

A beautiful poem on love having romantic expression with link to the autumn breeze has been presented startlingly.

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Thanks Revered Sir, Thanks for the lovely remarks and these great words of encouragement.

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Rini Shibu 12 April 2018

Romantic poem, well penned subhas

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Thanks dear Rini for the lovely remarks and these great words of encouragement

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 April 2018

Like a red rose! ! ! Love and Art! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks fSir or the lovely remarks and these great words of encouragement

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