Thursday, April 28, 2011

Love Felt By A Touch Comments

Rating: 4.9

Have you felt, your heart beat?
A little faster than its peak..
When you faced your secret flame..
Your lips trembled lusciously tough to speak.
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love is powerful force. it is felt even without touching.. goo dpoem nisha

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Tanveer Alam 28 July 2011

Its really amazing...........

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 June 2011

the experience of first love is so fascinating.nice ink. a shiver must have run down your spine with that touch.liked it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2011

When you faced your secret flame.. Your lips trembled lusciously tough to speak.......yes it is fascinating stage when it comes first time in life.. beautiful stage to be enjoyed in its earnestness... lovely poem....10

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Bhupesh Balakrishnan 29 April 2011

Nice way of expression of the first touch from you Poet.

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