Saturday, September 9, 2017

Love Fades Comments

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Flowers slowly fade,
The sun slowly goes down
Darkness kills the light slowly……..so it is
Her love for me fades slowly,
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Julius Saidu
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 September 2017

I was a diamond in her life once Now am a mere stone Now my smiles means nothing, And my heart keeps beating….till when? a truth you have portrayes so well in descriptive terms.. thank you for this poem dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Julius. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Julius Saidu

Julius Saidu

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