Monday, June 27, 2011

Love Eternal Comments

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The vow I take to love you forever till my last,
Every word I speak, confirm an attitude die cast.

Eternity would still be insufficient, I proclaim,
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Diwakar Bhatt
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Priya Arora 07 December 2012

You dwell in me as the tender part of my soul, Transcendental phenomenon to feel as a whole. You write so beautifully..after reading your one poem it encourage me to read one more of ur poem :) so good you jot down your expreesions.

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Who will be freed first from these shackles earthly, Nobody knows, but with love etched in hearts indelibly.... lovely poem...10 no one may know about tomorrow pray for him and lie low whoever has taken birth may have to depart with death

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Diwakar Bhatt

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