I call this mansion, not a home. For without
your love 'tis but a tomb.
I choke with every breath I take, as loneliness
engulfs each room.
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Pain of a lonely heart echoing out of its grief stricken walls...good write, Thad melancholically romantic...10
A great write Thad! A lonely house of empty but silent walls of torment to memorie's past. An easy tenner, if it were allowed? God bless us all-MJG.
A very sad but a truly wonderful poem Thad, the work of a master poet. Best wishes, Andrew
This is one many of us can relate to, one day this feeling will pass, a poignant write, 10 Lynda xxx
This is weird, I just watched a late night horror flick 'The Reeker' about an unseen killer that reeks of death...'I choke with every breath'.....Good write from you....10.
Been there, done that and you will smile again :) This is a poignant tale of love and life just as it is, imperfect. Thank you for sharing, a definite 10+.
Thad, It's very sad poem... especially when, only by memoirs is filled our' rooms of happiness'..10.......... Best wishes, Tsira
made me feel really sad and lonely after reading. Really good images :)