Love Ending Defeat Comments

A good mature poem at your age shows that you have the talent......A good picture drawn about a relationship that was once adorable full of love and emotions yet came to an end with compromises online.......One has to move on with life without getting into depression of broken relations considering the message conveyed in this poem................10

not only is that sweet and sad but it flows really well it's so easy to read and terribly beautiful

That's so sad....It's one of those poems where you love it, but...it's really sad! : (....Very good though