Friday, June 3, 2016

Love Echoes Fascinates Tugs At Heart Strings Chambers Comments

Rating: 5.0

in desert sands dune dry golden grains
released winds swift suddenly tumbling
into oasis miracle fertile love memories
water transforms wastes liquid rippling
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Terence George Craddock
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Mihaela Pirjol 04 June 2016

I love the density of composition in this poem, that sparkles with an explosion of ethereal imagery - very well conceived; and I am glad that my poem '' Nostalgia '', had inspired the creation of such magnificent words.

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Terry Craddock 04 June 2016

Sometimes the beauty of one of your poems Mihaela is the apex highlight of my day, I loved your poem 'Nostalgia' with images which delighted my mind, and because I enjoyed it so much I wrote this in a traditional Shakespearean sonnet end rhyme scheme which I normally avoid because the style is too easy. This style was perfected by masters in a past age and I am more interested in contemporary themes and events less written. But the quality of poems produced in this form are often superior when addressing universal themes like love and your exquisite poem deserved nothing less. Your themes Mihaela often address themes I love, with a unique sincere insight expressed with wonderful sensitivity, therefore comments of appreciation flow easily into poems written with pleasure, thus though I presently write little several are often inspired by your themes, therefore dedicated to you.

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