Thursday, November 12, 2015

Love – Drunk Comments

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Your love is liquor, in it I am drunk,
I stagger up and down, not satisfied,
I take more, and my soul is amplified,
As I recount I’ve lost being in a funk,
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Shakil Ahmed 12 November 2015

beautiful love sonnet, the poem is colored with your heartfelt passion, thanks for sharing.

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Souren Mondal 12 November 2015

A very interesting analogy between alcohol and love.. And the sonnet form is good too... Thank you for sharing..

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Oyeyemi Famodun 12 November 2015

Thanks, Souren.

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