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lack of understanding and lack of humanity doesn't yield successful love donation!
You're right, I do like this poem. It is quite interesting and has a mysterious undertone of statements that are being made. I can admit it don't fully grasp its intent, but do recognize it is intended.
to avert such fear fully........lovely. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.
pain shrieks from the scalded the great agony of lack- of something human and peace of understanding....beautiful thought
If it's love I am a donor and I happily condone whatever it's returns are. Every day is a day for donating love.
Yes we seem to be suffering from a black out of wisdom and harboring fear and hatred in our delusional minds. Very effective and well written poem bringing emotions out.
Yes I would like to see the day of love donation in every single day in this world. Thank you for such a beautiful poem Yoonoos.
no body wants to give.. I have tried teaching many... they rudely come and say - - YOU WANT AIDS - - sad indifference glad to read ur nice composed poem
a poem of lovely sentiments that should be taken on board in order to make our world a better place? ...……………..well written Yoonoos
A beautiful poem on love and peace which provides a strong message to the earthlings has been touchingly expressed.10
'Love' is the real solution to war...lucidly explained in your lovely lines advocating for a ' love-donation day'.....
The whole world is longing for Peace only....a lovely thought and a powerful message to be honoured and accepted...thank you sir for your comment on my poem....I really feel greatly honoured
A strong message to all who share love and care. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.
A nice message of peace and love, so nicely sent through a touching poem.
Love is the antidote to all human misery.....! Missiles will not fly an atom bombs will not be detonated when love takes sway! Powerful write!
... black out to the mind of those in high position... the total writing metaphorically brilliant with its fantastic imagery. Thank you. Pranab k c
A poem with a beautiful message. The harsh realities of the world today, needs a Love Donation Day. Wished if there was a day like this. Loved reading it.Thanks for sharing!
A ray of hope in these harsh realities of life. Life is still beautiful in-spite of the hurdles. A great reminder to spread love and compassion. A much needed oxygen to humankind.
Love donation day such a good concept. Lord knows how much we need it always, specially now a days.
pain shrieks from the scalded the great agony of lack- of something human and peace of understanding to summit a world's love donation day The necessity of achieving what we lack is badly felt...10