Saturday, May 5, 2018

Love Donation Day Comments

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pain shrieks from the scalded the great agony of lack- of something human and peace of understanding to summit a world's love donation day The necessity of achieving what we lack is badly felt...10

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Queeny Gona 31 December 2019

lack of understanding and lack of humanity doesn't yield successful love donation!

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Robert Plese 29 December 2019

You're right, I do like this poem. It is quite interesting and has a mysterious undertone of statements that are being made. I can admit it don't fully grasp its intent, but do recognize it is intended.

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Anjandev Roy 13 August 2019

to avert such fear fully........lovely. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

pain shrieks from the scalded the great agony of lack- of something human and peace of understanding....beautiful thought

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Akhtar Jawad 02 February 2019

If it's love I am a donor and I happily condone whatever it's returns are. Every day is a day for donating love.

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Savita Tyagi 18 June 2018

Yes we seem to be suffering from a black out of wisdom and harboring fear and hatred in our delusional minds. Very effective and well written poem bringing emotions out.

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Prayad Brian Pantasri 12 June 2018

Yes I would like to see the day of love donation in every single day in this world. Thank you for such a beautiful poem Yoonoos.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 June 2018

no body wants to give.. I have tried teaching many... they rudely come and say - - YOU WANT AIDS - - sad indifference glad to read ur nice composed poem

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Tom Allport 11 June 2018

a poem of lovely sentiments that should be taken on board in order to make our world a better place? ...……………..well written Yoonoos

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 June 2018

A beautiful poem on love and peace which provides a strong message to the earthlings has been touchingly expressed.10

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Kishore Kumar Das 07 June 2018

'Love' is the real solution to war...lucidly explained in your lovely lines advocating for a ' love-donation day'.....

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Indira Renganathan 07 June 2018

The whole world is longing for Peace only....a lovely thought and a powerful message to be honoured and accepted...thank you sir for your comment on my poem....I really feel greatly honoured

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 June 2018

A strong message to all who share love and care. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 June 2018

A nice message of peace and love, so nicely sent through a touching poem.

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Valsa George 05 June 2018

Love is the antidote to all human misery.....! Missiles will not fly an atom bombs will not be detonated when love takes sway! Powerful write!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 05 June 2018

... black out to the mind of those in high position... the total writing metaphorically brilliant with its fantastic imagery. Thank you. Pranab k c

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 June 2018

A poem with a beautiful message. The harsh realities of the world today, needs a Love Donation Day. Wished if there was a day like this. Loved reading it.Thanks for sharing!

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 June 2018

A ray of hope in these harsh realities of life. Life is still beautiful in-spite of the hurdles. A great reminder to spread love and compassion. A much needed oxygen to humankind.

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Savita Tyagi 31 May 2018

Love donation day such a good concept. Lord knows how much we need it always, specially now a days.

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