Love Donation Day Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Love Donation Day

Rating: 4.5


Smoke silvery as guided missiles
spirals sun ward
from flawed flue of power flu
smudges rat grey
the dove cooing olive grove
soots as coal war sky's blear-all black
causing black out to the mind
of those in high position.too late
and too dim their insight comes
when dust of dinghy atoms
pulp innocent flesh
fanning a hurricane of fire.
pain shrieks from the scalded
the great agony of lack-
of something human
and peace of understanding
to summit a world's love donation day
for a love alliance of human race
to avert such fear fully.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Houda Boukassoula 11 May 2018

the great agony of lack- of something human That's what's nowadays universe is suffering from.Very nice write

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Claude H Oliver Ii 07 May 2018

Every day a love donation day, yes. Love: the only medicine for fear.

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Anu Soneye 07 May 2018

This is a wonderful poem

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Raymond Farrell 07 May 2018

Your poem is very relevant today especially when we look at the state of the MIdde East.

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Nice poem, dear poet. Relevant in our time. THe world summit calling for common peace and understanding maybe a good step to that common dream. Too sad also, that international alliances, at some point, do violent strikes against nations, like Syria, that needs help and compassion.

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pain shrieks from the scalded the great agony of lack- of something human and peace of understanding to summit a world's love donation day The necessity of achieving what we lack is badly felt...10

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Queeny Gona 31 December 2019

lack of understanding and lack of humanity doesn't yield successful love donation!

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Robert Plese 29 December 2019

You're right, I do like this poem. It is quite interesting and has a mysterious undertone of statements that are being made. I can admit it don't fully grasp its intent, but do recognize it is intended.

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Anjandev Roy 13 August 2019

to avert such fear fully........lovely. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

pain shrieks from the scalded the great agony of lack- of something human and peace of understanding....beautiful thought

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