Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Love Doesn’t Live Here Anymore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love doesn’t live here anymore
It walked out and slammed the door
It packed it memories and faded photographs
It took its dreams, it took its laughs
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Alfred Ramos
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Kesav Easwaran 15 October 2008

An emotional poem on losing love...beautiful imageries have been added in lines to tell the severity of the loss of love in life...good poem Alfred,10

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Egi David Perdana 10 October 2008

it's about feel, and who we can take it

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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

'We never saw the life lines that we lacked We didn’t bother to pick up the pieces Or the bitterness and harm that it releases So I’ll just sadly lock the door Because love doesn’t live here anymore' Very true lines! Lovely poem. 10 for it.

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