Thursday, October 8, 2009

Love Does Hurt Comments

Rating: ★3.0

you hold your breath
but not for long
for tonight is the night
you will soon be gone
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Emily Torres
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Franchelly Luna 15 December 2010

I like this.Its short but the short ones are always the best.

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Emily Torres 08 October 2009

i guess its because while writing it i felt jumpy.

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Eatinb8 08 October 2009

Your peice of writing is, 'jumpy' and all over the place. Imagine a river. that is what your poem should be like. You have a good story, but with some tunning, it'll be great.

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Emily Torres

Emily Torres

San Antonio
Emily Torres
Emily Torres
San Antonio
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