The slow, slow throb of failing love
resounds full deep within my veins,
yet courses still to feed the mind
that longs for peace and sanity.
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A very heartfelt poem on failed love... well worded with excellent phrases and lines.
Thank you so much Chito, truly appreciate you commenting so generously. Lodigiana xx
This poem is very excellent. But I wants to reads successive poem.
Thank you so much for passing by and reading and commenting on my work..I truly appreciate this xx
Words are very neatly woven to express your mind on failing love. Liked it. 'Deceit, a cloak of velvet barbs drawn close about to comfort, yet, witheach embrace a wound inflicts a memory too raw to forget. '...is excellent. Thanks for sharing.10++++++
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