Friday, March 1, 2019

Love Does Fail Comments

Rating: 5.0

The slow, slow throb of failing love
resounds full deep within my veins,
yet courses still to feed the mind
that longs for peace and sanity.
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Anil Kumar Panda 17 March 2019

Words are very neatly woven to express your mind on failing love. Liked it. 'Deceit, a cloak of velvet barbs drawn close about to comfort, yet, witheach embrace a wound inflicts a memory too raw to forget. '...is excellent. Thanks for sharing.10++++++

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Lodigiana Poetess 17 March 2019

I am touched and humbled by your comments..thank you so very much xx

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C F 03 March 2019

A very heartfelt poem on failed love... well worded with excellent phrases and lines.

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Lodigiana Poetess 04 March 2019

Thank you so much Chito, truly appreciate you commenting so generously. Lodigiana xx

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Suresh kumar kantiwal 01 March 2019

This poem is very excellent. But I wants to reads successive poem.

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Lodigiana Poetess 02 March 2019

Thank you so much for passing by and reading and commenting on my work..I truly appreciate this xx

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