Friday, June 28, 2019

Love Disowned Comments

Rating: 5.0

As days split off
and drift away,
their dreams remain with me
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Kurt Philip Behm
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Terry Craddock 03 September 2020

This is a song of love, the first two stanzas captivated, but the third is powerfully unique 'The nights adopted orphaned suns, those times you woke and lied' the juxtaposition of 'nights adopted' with 'orphaned suns, ' stirs with imagery quite sublime.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 June 2019

" The past is black all future gone and present love disowned" . Mind blowing conceptualization and equally painful. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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