Love Departing Comments

I have just read this masterpiece poem, felt saddened. 'Watching love departing' is a terrible experience. For a heart 'shattered beyond all repair', this is more terrible. 'For one sweet moment, I basked in love's hue, Then with a poisoned tip, the arrow flew, Piercing my heart, bringing me to my knees, But Heaven ignores lovers' tragedies' - Everybody understands the pain, but few can express it so perfectly as you have done here. 'My heart has become a graveyard for dreams, ' and, 'Yet the dying heart tries to fan love's spent flame' and, 'Gone.... lost forever.... love's comforting word' - are the lines that blur the eyes of the readers like me. 10/10 from me.

My heart has become a graveyard for dreams, Dead are the hopes..... all the plans and the schemes, .. so sad lines memory lat long and compel us to remain among worst sufferer and lone goer

A beautifully sad and tragic poem, the pain of lost love is so well described, The lines flowed very nicely and the rhyming was very nice. A wonderful poem. Darla :)

My voice alone amidst silence is heard, Gone.... lost forever.... love's comforting word A beautiful heartfelt poem on love and pain where pain cries plaintively\Well expressed Well done 10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan,

Wow wow this is one of yor masterpieces! Such awesome metaphor and rhyming, creatively worded in poetry to portray thoughts on the jilting lover. Sad but the artistry is noteworthy here.

Well written verse.....I've seen love come back from the dead....and the hopeless singing joyful songs...love wasn't meant for eyes or head....more for the few than marching throngs. ;)

But Heaven ignores lovers' tragedies. This beautiful verse so well summarizes the whole poem. Your pain vividly reaches the reader in a most effective and poetic way. It is felt and understood.