Sunday, March 6, 2011

Love Departed Comments

Rating: 4.7

Freshness of love made me lively
To give up the life of solitude boldly
Year after year we loved happily
Hand in hand ever walked closely
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Rekha Mandagere
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 May 2016

They uttered in chorus Great! Great! But the final test to win was already set Plucking away my root was only their trial Implanting New Belief was their word final.....swam with the tides a bit far..... plucking my root away. never look back. love this poem. love, experiences....... decisions..... thank you very much dear poetess. tony

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Souren Mondal 09 February 2016

'Hearing that terrific crime I was taken aback Inner voice cautioned me never look back! ' Such a nice finale to a well crafted poem.. Thank you :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 January 2016

Love departed! ! But, there is much hope in life. Nice work.

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Amitava Sur 22 March 2015

Very nice penning, in fact true love is always threatened, it is envied mostly.

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Heather Wilkins 21 July 2013

if love departs it has grown cold. nice write

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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2013

A note by the poet may clear the confusion.

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Priya Gupta 13 January 2012

awesome... loved it....

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Neetha Sasidharan 31 December 2011

dat's true, there r always black hands to tear apart lovers. but d way ur fought was grt.... nice rhyming set...

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Elena Sandu 12 September 2011

An interesting poem dear friend, I try to read it again and again, am not very sure to understand the end. To me it sounded like such a happy time you had with your loved one than others came admired you and wanted to add beside that sweet love, something that made you run and cry.. I seem to feel quite strange the lines: They uttered in chorus Great! Great! But the final test to win was already set Plucking away my root was only their trial Implanting New Belief was their word final to me, sounds like a scene the from a tv studio..it does let you think that you have the chance of a choice, than takes from you with the both hands..

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Louis Cecile 18 July 2011

This may be an earlier poem, but I feel it is wanting to expand more. The flow is fine, but I am sure there is more expression for what is a hard subject. Good work though.

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Alto Thomas Jr 24 June 2011

An interesting theme.Directed and unwavering.

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Antonio Liao 20 April 2011

Great and admirable desire...mindset that focus the emotional challenge of reality of what is in the present and visible...thank you for the sharing and God bless.... God bless a 10 +++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 March 2011

Great piece of work; and this is part of the experiences of love. But, we have to keep the fire burning always; no matter how hard it is. Thank you for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Unwritten Soul 17 March 2011

Love always like a flower, it freshen by water, supply a support...when no support the flower will dry and fall, the love is gone...but for love to God will always make u strong.. As you said never look back, is really true for all things because we cant move forward if we stay in the past...we need to move on. A child maybe innocent but innocent doesnt mean ignorant, still life is full of colorants...just how we use and see it...Unwritten Soul

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Adi Cox 17 March 2011

I felt that this poem had depth to it when I read it. Like you are dealing with change in your life. The words 'Do not look back' struck a chord with me. I often say something similar to myself: 'Don't look back, there is nothing there for you.' An enjoyable poem to read with a depth of feeling to it.10/10.

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SOMNATH VERMA 17 March 2011

very beautiful lines.....

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Louis Cecile 16 March 2011

Great style developing in your poems. To express themes simply and make one think t the same time. The last line is particularly strong in summarizing the poem and how to react.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 15 March 2011

Plucking away my root was only their trial a sharp line, you only could write. visit my blog: rmshanmugam.blogspot.com

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Vinod Kumar 15 March 2011

Review of a highly experienced Track and field, appreciated, , , Nice

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 14 March 2011

they can never implant a new belief on you as long as your roots are sturdy.write more.

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