Tuesday, October 16, 2007

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Rating: 4.7

From the first day I saw you,
You entered my heart.
I hoped we'd be together,
And never apart.
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Will Adams
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Kelsey Smith 03 November 2007

Ohh! ! That is very very good! !

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Nisha Shavers 28 October 2007

Oh my Goodness that is amazing...i started tearing up as i read it.... you have crazy good talent

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Evaughn Gray 26 October 2007

that's sad but sadly it's life, , alot of people will be able to relate to this poem..~hazel

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Audrey Stephenson 26 October 2007

how endearing.... it's refreshing to see such pure admiration. I feel your pain buddy. keep it up.

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Angel Smith 16 October 2007

Nicely written...Please read some of my poems maybe youll enjoy mine as much as i enjoy yours.

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Will Adams

Will Adams

Crossville, Tennessee
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