Tuesday, March 25, 2008

Love Deferred Comments

Rating: 4.5

My love for you is so ethereal,
But every time you are close it all becomes so unreal.
My heart can feel the voice of your heart though,
But it’s all a different picture that you show.
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Miss tee 26 March 2008

ah nicely written..very passionate and romantic...very sweet..good job :)

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Marvin Brato 25 March 2008

Passionate poem filled with romance! High marks.

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