Love & Deceit Comments

Thus Sun learnt the art of deceit, It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays And goes with the twilight. the description similar like a melting snow.......candle wax....... the finite line sun to go away with twilights is very impressive to read and feel! !

Sometimes love is like that..It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays And goes with the twilight.

Better times to this love of your so wondrously spun poem & better luck to love's intrinsic magic seed next time around, when Sun and Moon again shack up under a more harmonious cosmic sway.