Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Love ~ Darkness Comments

Rating: 4.7

The whispering of night
Revealing it's hidden treasures.
Why silver moon is silent tonight?
What it is trying to hide?
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M. Asim Nehal
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Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2016

Life and nature! With the relations around us. Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 February 2016

So lovely. The romantic feel in this poem touches the heart's strings. Love n darkness have a relation that is as old as life on earth. The moonlit night is sure to dispel all fears n doubts from the lover's heart.

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2016

Thx much NI...

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Valsa George 27 February 2016

A lovely poem on love! In the moonlit night, let love flourish, lifting the veils of doubt and fear!

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 February 2016

Great write man, you write superbly.

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T Rajan Evol 27 February 2016

This is a masterpiece indeed, you write with real passion Mr. Asim.

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Navod Dilhara 27 February 2016

Here the silver moon is the witness of the particular scene. And if that particular lass did something wrong, would the silver moon reveal the matter to anyone? If he would do so, never ever make him the witness again... Nice poem!

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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 February 2016

Beautiful poem....thank you for sharing sir :)

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 24 February 2016

Beautiful serene and calm moonlit night for lovers to take each other into confidence and strengthen their love and Trust.

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Souren Mondal 23 February 2016

Sometimes a little transgression can be less pure but humane.. We are just all prone to transgress and break our limits.. A sweet and lovely poem Asim. Thank you for sharing - :)

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 February 2016

Love is a beautiful emotion and when in love all the veils of falsehood are lifted and only truth prevails just like the crystal clear mood shining in this pure romantic mystical night. Let no doubt seep into your heart and let love rule the night. Beautiful poem with a touch of male chauvinism attached. No offence, it's just my thought.: D Love this poem 10+++

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Kelly Kurt 23 February 2016

Spoken like a true romantic. Well penned

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