Saturday, November 7, 2009

Love Costs Comments

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We lie together, side by side.
Our breathing is like music to my ears, our hearts beat together as one.
My pulse still pounds beneath the surface,
Beating in time with yours.
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Rebecca Cox
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Clesec Swahn 07 November 2009

Beautiful Poem, It sounds like something my girlfriend would have written about us before we got together. I used not be able to see her for beans. I don't normally suggest people read my poems but I wrote a poem about this. It's under my poems its called the crimson maid. Read it, tell me if you like it.

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