Friday, September 26, 2008

Love Confused Comments

Rating: 5.0

chances he uses
power he drains
courage he picks up
but still he's frail
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Alen Alexander
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Mona Martinez 14 September 2009

very emotional poem. so sad but, yet so clever the way both sides are told a bit. he's a secret lover of her and all he want is that one special girl only to find out they don't love you the same way you love them. can relate to this but, life goes on. very good writting. :)

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DaNa XxX 11 June 2009

what a nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! i really liked the last part! ! ! ! ...keep waritting! ^_^

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Crazy Vampire 09 June 2009

nice poem! i have many friends wwho like one another and yet they dont say anything because they are afraid of rejection and of hurting there friend.10+++

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Toni Bellanger 02 June 2009

It was very well put. Especially the last line.

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 30 May 2009

is this you? ......i do hope not....otherwise it wudnt be fair for anyone to be subjected to this kinda pain...love hurts.........and u expressed it soo poetically.....pure genius.......good work.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ... :)

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