chances he uses
power he drains
courage he picks up
but still he's frail
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what a nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! i really liked the last part! ! ! ! ...keep waritting! ^_^
nice poem! i have many friends wwho like one another and yet they dont say anything because they are afraid of rejection and of hurting there friend.10+++
is this you? ......i do hope not....otherwise it wudnt be fair for anyone to be subjected to this kinda pain...love hurts.........and u expressed it soo poetically.....pure genius.......good work.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ... :)
very emotional poem. so sad but, yet so clever the way both sides are told a bit. he's a secret lover of her and all he want is that one special girl only to find out they don't love you the same way you love them. can relate to this but, life goes on. very good writting. :)