Sunday, November 15, 2009

Love-Chords. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like moonlit music-ensemble
.................................... playing soft chorus,
Love's notes catch fire,
............................... cut adrift, and soaring,
...
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Fay Slimm
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John Knight 19 November 2009

Hi Fay - an elegant poem - which plucked the strings of all our hearts with its gentle emotive language. The 'Fay Slimm Structure' is perfect for this poem. Lovely - TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN

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Georgia Girl 16 November 2009

oh this is GORGEOUS! ! love described as music...fantastic...10

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David Harris 15 November 2009

Fay they say that music is the food of love and you have demonstrated that well here. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 15 November 2009

A very romantic write Fay captures the fullness of romance 10 Daniel

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