I had felt love taking control of my heart body and soul
Making me feel like I was walking on air without worries
Without cares.
Then it changed and it felt like a thunderstorm racing thru my heart
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Ultimately, a strong perception of love being strong like a concrete wall- after much tumult and dramatic loneliness. Great poem.
This, in my opinion, is one of the best poems you have ever written! Powerful descriptions accurately present the many aspects of love, which indeed can and does change. You really nailed it, Louis- - truly a great poem. I hope to see more of these! :)