Thursday, August 1, 2019

Love Can Change Comments

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I had felt love taking control of my heart body and soul
Making me feel like I was walking on air without worries
Without cares.
Then it changed and it felt like a thunderstorm racing thru my heart
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louis rams
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Practicing Poetess 26 August 2019

This, in my opinion, is one of the best poems you have ever written! Powerful descriptions accurately present the many aspects of love, which indeed can and does change. You really nailed it, Louis- - truly a great poem. I hope to see more of these! :)

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Julia Luber 01 August 2019

Ultimately, a strong perception of love being strong like a concrete wall- after much tumult and dramatic loneliness. Great poem.

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