Friday, October 17, 2008

Love Can Be Replaced Comments

Rating: 5.0

Im standing here crying
looking at you - i felt like dying

You said i was the one, you want me in your life
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Jacqueline Louw
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Khumoetsile Mhlanga 14 November 2008

Simple & honest. Nothing more said than what you wanted to be read. Thank you for being a voice in the crowd - lending expression of the hurt that gives credance to the quip that 'love is not for the faint of heart'. Don't stop loving: never stop loving. Love loves to love - that's its nature. It's our nature...

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1khmerking Kampuchea 17 October 2008

Very good poem! It touches me, of how a person can let someone that is speacial go without feeling regret. Love is hard to come by. Like the old saying: 'Seeing Can Be Deceiving' and 'Love Is Blind' I'm giving this a 10!

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Neil Marsden 17 October 2008

Another obviously personal piece of very powerful writing, some tremendous lines in here - wonderful stuff - keep writing whilst the inspiration is so strong! Neil.

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Patricia Gale 17 October 2008

A heart felt piece.... forever is not always four all

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