Love Burns Comments
From the night sky up above,
A star drawn by intense love
Shoots to earth at a great speed,
Leaving its own elongated orbit.
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Lovely piece of poetry bristling with insight. I like the rhyme scheme of the piece. Thanks for sharing Khairul. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.
Dear Chinedu, My sincere thanks for your thoughtful appreciation of my poem and for praising its rhyme scheme. I am truly inspired by your comment. I have read your poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST and have left my comment there.
Sublime and poignant message left in your silent, quiet poem. I believe that love does burn at times, we cannot seem to avoid it. Really great imagery, lingering to the end. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn
I am so glad that you have analyzed my poem so aptly. I cannot but agree fully to what you have said in your comment. Thanks a lot for your thoughtful words. My very best wishes...
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7/25/2025 10:42:05 AM # 1.0.0
How does love burn is so touchingly and impressively delineated by you. I wish to cite...From the night sky up above, / A star drawn by intense love / Shoots to earth at a great speed, / Leaving its own elongated orbit. Brilliant work.