Thursday, February 4, 2016

Love Burning Brightly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh my love, burning brightly through the night, out-
shining the moon and twinkling stars on behalf of my
heart.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 06 February 2016

ON BEHALF OF MY HEART - That's a wonderful closing image for the first stanza which fulfilled the title of your poem with Love-Light outshining cosmic lights - the hyperbole is is the essence of love poetry.The last stanza is written as a a promise, a bond between souls, and I sense the whole poem is an act of faith in the durability of this bond across time. There are no shadows here, only the fresh light spreading all around.

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Valsa George 05 February 2016

Beautiful presentation of a lustrous love that can outshine the glitter of stars and even the moon! It is a heavenly experience when two hearts are blended together in love. Such love can fill one with the energy to battle with all adversities of life!

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 February 2016

True love heals the SOUL. Nice work.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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