Monday, September 25, 2017

Love Bridge Comments

Rating: 5.0

i was at the risk of love'
while walking on a rough love rug,
all eyes went blind
as the the light lost it smile,
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Ifeoluwa Philips
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2017

Welcome to P. H. dot com dear Ifeoluwa, you have inscribed a beautiful poem on love. It has been hauntingly expressed. The concluding lines are most impressive. It may be quoted.. your heart us the love bridge that joins you and me together. Really love is a bridge that joins two edges. Thanks for sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 September 2017

when ocean rise and the thunder roar I stick my heart to wait till the bridge joined Wow, beautiful lines. Nicely penned. Thanks for the sharing. 10++ for it.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 September 2017

Write comment. Great start, Philips. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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