Monday, September 8, 2008

**** Love Bloodbath *** Comments

Rating: 4.3

Bang! Bang! And the head splits open
Like a work of Art
Mushroom pie painted in red
Human form has transformed into mincemeats
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Elike Ikechukwu 27 October 2008

Quite revolutionary, with good imagery. Just hoping that some day our hearts could peirce into one. You did a good very work.

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Maxislam Beauty 06 October 2008

Love is all better than all whilst many conjecture on love and timing.Great Job.

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Cheung Shun Sang 22 September 2008

I know that you love lives and peace-ok

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 September 2008

interesting poem of unique style, life by the tragedies in the nichie of social millieu, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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P K 19 September 2008

a good one! ! ! .....nice poem! ! ! : -)

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Warsan Omer 19 September 2008

Thats a really nice poem i like it read some of mines some time

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Lava P 19 September 2008

10 for dis touching twist=============

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Gone with the wind 19 September 2008

An outstanding write. Really touched my heart. Love Gul

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Rose Rosado 18 September 2008

What a great poem! Its really great - 10!

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Qendresa Ulaj 18 September 2008

great poem you wrote here... congrats... i give u a ten

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Modi . 18 September 2008

Your work really moved me by its darkness, depth and drama, thank you for asking me to read it.

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Aijaz Asif 17 September 2008

wow now thats dark, an extremely beautiful poem the one i like most, a great write sulaiman bhai....thanks

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Elena Toledo 17 September 2008

A very deep poem..Awesome work! ! ! I would love for you to read me too my freind Sul blessings Elena

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Tj Becker 16 September 2008

This was full of dark seeded emotions. Very descriptive although a horrible scene, you painted it well with your pen. It read as a story in poetry style. A good write

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Kimberley Lim 16 September 2008

A interesting pom, of anger and pain. Great expressions, through simple words. (: Keep striving.

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Dare Ola 15 September 2008

A tragedy you'll say line 8. The poem is ok.

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Jennifer Smith 15 September 2008

I like this poem. It is very deep and grasps a pain inside when reading it. good job.

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Some Poems 15 September 2008

An interesting poem. It certainly grips you despite the curious manner in which it was written.

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angelianne 1012 15 September 2008

u cant really expect anything less from mr. sulaiman....this is an awesome poem...the emotion and the words are superb...really awesome....10+...

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Robert L Bixler III 14 September 2008

Very powerful poem, Sulaiman... I love the raw emotion and imagery you use in this poem.

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