Bang! Bang! And the head splits open
Like a work of Art
Mushroom pie painted in red
Human form has transformed into mincemeats
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Love is all better than all whilst many conjecture on love and timing.Great Job.
interesting poem of unique style, life by the tragedies in the nichie of social millieu, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing
Thats a really nice poem i like it read some of mines some time
An outstanding write. Really touched my heart. Love Gul
Your work really moved me by its darkness, depth and drama, thank you for asking me to read it.
wow now thats dark, an extremely beautiful poem the one i like most, a great write sulaiman bhai....thanks
A very deep poem..Awesome work! ! ! I would love for you to read me too my freind Sul blessings Elena
This was full of dark seeded emotions. Very descriptive although a horrible scene, you painted it well with your pen. It read as a story in poetry style. A good write
A interesting pom, of anger and pain. Great expressions, through simple words. (: Keep striving.
I like this poem. It is very deep and grasps a pain inside when reading it. good job.
An interesting poem. It certainly grips you despite the curious manner in which it was written.
u cant really expect anything less from mr. sulaiman....this is an awesome poem...the emotion and the words are superb...really awesome....10+...
Very powerful poem, Sulaiman... I love the raw emotion and imagery you use in this poem.
Quite revolutionary, with good imagery. Just hoping that some day our hearts could peirce into one. You did a good very work.