Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Love, Blood, Tears And Smiles Comments

Rating: 5.0

How painful it was to know that it weren't you,
And I mistook you for someone else,
My heart was crushed into so many pieces,
My love was for you not for anyone else.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2017

A romantic heart feels love amazingly at each moment.Emotion scribbles more life and life thinks to feel love. A broken heart still smiles in love. Although this is Difficult to decide who has inspired life for new art still broken heart smiles more due to existence of love. Excellent presentation! ...10

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Rajnish Manga 27 March 2017

This is an amazing presentation of the dilemma and the predicament of a romancing heart. How difficult it is to make a choice but the emotions offer a just solution. Thanks a lot.

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Bharati Nayak 26 February 2017

Have you ever seen when a broken heart smiles! - - - - - - - - - Yes, true love makes the broken heart smile.A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

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Khalida Bano Ali 22 February 2017

A wonderful poem............................................................

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