Friday, March 18, 2005

Love Bites Comments

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After you left me
I’m just a lonely woman
Gazing in the mirror
Sadly tracing all the love bites
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Nasra Al Adawi
lonely mirror woman
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Zoe Nyght 28 March 2005

hm. I like this, short and simple, and a fun play on words. Only one comment, why 'deeper'? There's nothing you're comparing it to, so it feels kind of incomplete. Why don't you just say 'deeply' or something?

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Nasra Al Adawi

Nasra Al Adawi

Pemba - Tanzania
Nasra Al Adawi
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Pemba - Tanzania
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