Thursday, February 2, 2006

Love Bites! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love bites, like a Great White Shark, in the
dismal sea of love...Only agonizing pain
and disappointment may fittingly be stuck
to a broken heart's chamber!
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Michael Gale
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Gina Onyemaechi 02 February 2006

Ouch, speaker! Your poem's got a pretty sharp bite on it as well! I can almost hold the pain here in my hand. Rocking stuff. Kind regards, Gina. PS: bless you for your feedback on 'He Slapped Her...', Michael. Regards again, Gina.

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