Tuesday, May 8, 2018

Love Beyond Horizon.... Comments

Rating: 4.3

When I sit alone under the tree,
You gave a helping hand for free,
When I feel lonely with teary eyes,
You motivate me from the heart where love lies...
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Naila Rais
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Dr. Antony Theodore 03 January 2021

Seeing your face, my loneliness dies, With the cheers and gay in my eyes, When in lunch you waits for me, Or just tease like a buzzing bee.. Love and how it cures. lovely. tony

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A B Faniki 07 October 2019

A touching poem well versed and laced with steady rhyme and rhythm. It is beautifly penned

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 March 2019

.lovely poem u r a natural poetess NR

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Thomas Kane 09 December 2018

I must say when a little jealousy is felt after reading I had to dissect why I had those feelings. The reason is many not to much as I could narrow to two. I don't believe I have had a friend that close in my life, but yet I have tried to be that and failed. Secondly it is such a great poem I wish I had written it lol.

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Dev Anand 03 December 2018

You are my honey, I am your hive, You are the reason, the reason I am alive, You are so cheerful, full of delight, You are so hardworking, may you reach the height. very great love poem i like your romantic mood.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 January 2019

I love ur replication Dave your memory is a wave after wave

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Elle Smith 24 October 2018

Love and friendship are very powerful when combined. Thanks for sharing! ! ! :)

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Naila Rais 03 November 2018

U r most welcome! :) Naila

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Mohammed Yunus 10 October 2018

awesome.......! ! ! ! ! !

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Naila Rais 10 October 2018

Thnz! ! .............................. Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 September 2018

you have yet to read the answer to your qs I'd replied pl do

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Ramotlhaba Chrisjan 13 September 2018

What a way of expressing LOVE. Your poem is so cute

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Naila Rais 13 September 2018

Thanks.............! ! ! !

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Rajnish Manga 09 September 2018

So lovely and interesting. The poem reminds us of our youth with friends who were there the moment we felt we need them. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

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Warren R Abbott Jr 02 September 2018

Dearest Naila, we seek painterly expression to enliven our canvas to wring out the essence of life and feelings, to capture the energy and vibrances of the universe with Spirit and all energy of heart. Beautiful work! Warren

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Naila Rais 02 September 2018

Thanks so much sir.... For reading and your motivational words...

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2018

A wonderful love poem, thanks for sharing it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 September 2018

I always love your funny kicks, Or my ice-creams which you licks, You motivate me, when I am sick, I am fan of your notorious wicks... always remembering you and keeping u in my heart. a fine heart touching poem of love. tony

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Njuguna Peter Mnyagia 26 August 2018

You are my honey am your hive. lovely lovely lovely line.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2018

Positive morals with positive friends. Thanks for sharing.

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Loaded with love is this creative and composition. Nice flow that makes it easy to read and appreciate!

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Naila Rais 24 May 2018

Thnx so much for taking a pause.... Your words are to a great value...

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 18 May 2018

I like this lines... Seeing your face, my loneliness dies With the cheers and gay in my face.... Great artwork.....keep writing

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 18 May 2018

Eloquently written dear poet... 10+++++ .I'm adding it to my poem list You may love to read and rate my poems Vibrant Love and Let Love Love Us All....Thanks in advance

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Naila Rais 13 July 2018

Oh! Thnx so much for reading ..... Naila

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Come on naila rais...lovely poem

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Kostas Lagos 09 May 2018

Great poem.Touching, tender.Thanks for sharing

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