Friday, June 26, 2009

Love Between Two Persons Comments

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Love is the strongest feeling a person can feel and share
With it, the impossible is done
And all of life seems fair
Having the sensation and idea that something new has begun
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Alex Perez
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 26 June 2009

Hi Alex, I read your poem and it's a good one, except grammatically, we say love 'between' two persons, or love towards 'anyone'. If it's a group, we say love 'among' people. Perhaps a revision of your title will make it more appropriate. Cynthia

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