There you stand
Across from me,
I stare, unable to look away from your beauty
You are the thing that holds me here now
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Jessica, you describe a feeling which is magic, something to hold on to and to remember for ever. It happened to me when I was forty it lasted she is making coffee for me right now. regards Bob
Not many can experience this feeling friend... And you'v expressed it well indeed... i mean, it is sort of hard to express what love at first sight really means, cause say to some other friend of yours, 'i fell in love with his the moment i saw him'.. he ll think u r mad... but i d say.. not many are lucky to feel such a romantic feeling, and u v expressed it well indeed.. good write.. with lovesss shan
Love at first sight. Sigh! As I get older, I have started believing in it.
Well described inner feelings Jessica - - 'Love at first Sight' is a very apt title too for the verse.....10 from Fay for a well thought out piece. - - keep writing.
Wonderful snap-shot imagery in this well written piece Jessica...you have a talent my friend....keep expressing that wonderful soul..........10++
really wonderfull. is it real. i can see you and your lady love before me. so natural. voted 10 surya
Premature love or love at first sight is a beautiful endeavor, however, once reality strikes those same uncontrollable feelings become erratic and sometimes deadly for the affected hearts.
I dont get it. You rule. OMgosh its unbelievable how talented you are in everywhich way, and might i say it was never love at first sight in my case..more like friendship at first site, baby its love right now :) but i still do strongly believe in it anyways :) i love ya jj my bestie good job and btw...HOW DO YOU MANAGE TO RECEIVE SO MANY COMMENTS?