Monday, August 11, 2008

Love At First Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shy monster closed his only eye,
and let a tear run down his nose.
He didn’t really like to cry,
but such sadness in him arose.
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Ernestine Northover
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Ency Bearis 12 August 2008

lovely poem, very inspiring..it show how ugly you are, still there will be someone who will love you...great write..... Ency Bearis

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Wonderfully imaginative yet ultimately based on the truth of many human relationships. As Andrew mentioned, a departure, and it works, for sure. t x

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Andrew Blakemore 12 August 2008

A bit of a departure from your normal style Ernestine. It nice to know that big horrible hairy monsters can find love too. Great poem. Love, Andrew xxx

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Thad Wilk 12 August 2008

Aww a happy ending for this sad monster, love happy endings! Glad he took a walk that night and finally found - love at first sight! ! *10*! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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