Sunday, July 3, 2022

Love At First Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fancy ball that night
She had tied her bun uptight
Shimmering ball gown perfectly made
Was put on her by her maid
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Miss Grace
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Rob Lamberton 23 March 2025

Sin-da-rail-a!

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Sandra Feldman 05 July 2022

Very clever and well written! Thanks for the good advice.

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Nabakishore Dash 05 July 2022

very nice poem MissGrace.More understanding was needed before gun.However your advice in the last line is a precaution for hot love.

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Ramesh T A 04 July 2022

Perhaps speaks louder, dear! Nice composition!

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Part 3. Gun is no solution. Good poem. Most pertinent issue is discussed in the poem loved it. Top score and myfav

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Part 2. Every man and woman may have his/her shortcomings. When in love, we tend to overlook most of them. Once married, the flaws in the spouse come to light. Unless both have the maturity, marriage fails.

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Love at first sight need not be despised thus. Nor should be . Character is what counts. A marriage can wait, until both knows each other well. So also, all the young ones need to know that there are no "designer boys" and "designer girls"

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