Love At First Sight Comments

In my whole dream In my entire feeling I do fulfill my thirsty within you I am having you as my destiny Love ans its mysteries.. our joys, p leasures and aspirations which we want to last a life long. You have well expressed and this is a fine love poem in all its simplicity. Thank yu dear poetess. tony

Thanks lot all of you for your valuable comments

well written emotional poem, i liked much.68286

well written emotional poem, i liked much.

well written poem full of emotion. liked it much.

Seems marital. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

A beautiful love poem. The flow and wordplay are amazing. Liked it.

Love someone that much till the last heartbeat

Love someone till my last heartbeat

Very beautiful and romantic piece.