Sunday, July 15, 2018

Love As Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

You can take the verses with you,
but false riches stay unrhymed

With love as wings, to heaven brings
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Kurt Philip Behm
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Terry Craddock 03 September 2020

Loved the flowing beauty of the rhyming simplicity with the gold left behind. The gold imagery reminded me of a good time when I wrote with a the brief gold motifs Ravished Vein Gold Mine Echo Hollow Ravished Vein Bled Vein Glitter Glitter Gone. It was a return to writing, thanks for the memory.

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