Thursday, July 26, 2012

Love Apple Comments

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The apple was yet to be red
Yet some tasted it
It tasted sour to some
And mixed to some
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Subrat Pradhan
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Saurabh Saxena 30 July 2012

great poem..several deep hidden suggestions...like u said Making their own judgements...this line holds true for this poem also...each will make his own judgement..none better than the rest!

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Captain Cur 30 July 2012

Good example of positive reenforcement using the deeper shade of love as an analogy of how we perceive and share love.

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Payal Parande 28 July 2012

i must say you are really brilliant such a great analogy i am no expert but i think its really beautiful The apple grew bigger and bigger that is love grow bigger and bigger with each moment i loved it i really envy you sir hope to read more of you art thank you for sharing it, payal

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Vipins Puthooran 28 July 2012

'tis a very good poem! ! ! ! well-written! ! !

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