The apple was yet to be red
Yet some tasted it
It tasted sour to some
And mixed to some
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Good example of positive reenforcement using the deeper shade of love as an analogy of how we perceive and share love.
i must say you are really brilliant such a great analogy i am no expert but i think its really beautiful The apple grew bigger and bigger that is love grow bigger and bigger with each moment i loved it i really envy you sir hope to read more of you art thank you for sharing it, payal
great poem..several deep hidden suggestions...like u said Making their own judgements...this line holds true for this poem also...each will make his own judgement..none better than the rest!