Love And War Comments

an excellent poem very well written and a nice truth great job

After all what we need is to survive in life with the best place and state of mind ever we had in our heart we just want to be cool and not be so hurt...too much shaped by others' order will make our life flexibility inelastic..._Soul

Very nice n realistic.. U can write better.. God Bless. Take care :)

written well..trez bien

Yeah our lives are pretty much like game of love and war. Nice poem

with simple words you described 2 big things personally, each are more dangerous in our life....: -) »so close«