Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Love And Time Comments

Rating: 4.4

tick, tock, tick, tock... stop and look at him tock...
for the keeper of time is a ticking, ticking, ticking...
if he were to stop that would be the end of a clock...
because he would stop a clicking, clicking, clicking...
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Daimon Ferguson
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margaret kaunda 17 January 2019

for without love and time the wouldnot have before the same i like the

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Neela Nath Das 06 September 2014

Congrats! This is a beautiful poem.You deserve this.

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all the important things in life: Time and Love..wonderful poem

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Bernard Snyder 06 September 2014

This poem was short, sweet and to the point. I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing.

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Amos Christopherson Masereka 06 September 2013

nice one: for without love and time the world wouldn't be the same,

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Neela Nath Das 06 September 2013

A wonderful poem.You deserve this honor.A 10 for you.

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Meera Panigrahi 08 September 2012

Love and time have been linked well

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Rumi Roy 07 September 2012

Excellent writing. Loved to read. Well done.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 September 2012

...time and love, the food and drink of the soul, ... beautiful poem with such wisdom written by words. Form is unique to communicate the abstract.... Nice.10

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Dr Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani 06 September 2012

Beautifully said. Excellent one. the only things that hold me to this rhyme and you and me together too! !

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Daimon Ferguson

Daimon Ferguson

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